deviant art





Login
Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour Lost Password?
Deviant Login
Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
About Me Varied / Hobbyist Member Mminrie Ré L'BatraFemale/Philippines Recent Activity
Deviant for 4 Years
Needs Premium Membership
Statistics 268 Deviations 6,840 Comments 16,042 Pageviews

Webcam

Journal History

deviantID

arlihama's Profile Picture
~arlihama
Mmina Mac
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
Philippines
A Statistics and Actuarial Sciences Major in De LaSalle University, hoping to find perfection in the abstract, learning mathematics as a philosophy of truth and as a science of perfection.

A coffee-intoxicated desk leech, with only one rule of life: caffeine is oxygen.
Interests
Crime-fighting Jesuit priests, a Payatas dumpsite, bad coffee, good French and a persistent toothache—these are the makings of a witty, fast-paced and intelligent multi-award-winning detective novel.

Read the review on Thoughtspresso.

Smaller and Smaller Circles takes you to Payatas, a place in Metro Manila known for its mountainous range of garbage, and the low horizon lined with galvanized iron roofs of shanties and a loving layer of industrial smoke.

Here, we meet Fr. Augustus "Gus" Saenz, SJ—a Jesuit priest who does autopsies, cool, composed, tall and handsome, likes classic rock and European music, clever with the tongue—and his once-student, now sidekick, Fr. Jerome Lucero, SJ. He is a clinical psychologist, whenever he's not saying mass, vomiting, or honking horns at traffic jams.

Gus discovers a pattern in the recent autopsies he's done at Payatas, and claims them to be serial killings. With the Philippines' intelligence community weak and skeptical, Gus and Jerome have to prove a point before any more killings happen. And so the chase for the Payatas whodunit commences . . .

For a Filipino, this is definitely new and entirely refreshing. When Felisa H. Batacan submitted her manuscript for the Palanca awards in 1999, hers was the first of the kind in the Filipino literary scene. It claims to be successfully "popular and literary", and record-breaking. Unlike most indie novels in the Philippines that have only one run of about a thousand copies, Smaller and Smaller Circles has been reprinted four times, making a total of 6,000 copies printed and sold.

I am a proud owner, one of the few-some thousands.

But as a novel, we have to use that big fish in a small pond metaphor to explain what it's like.

It's just new to the Philippines, to have a story like this and for a Manilenyo to imagine a serial killer possibly be eating turon at the same carinderia, buy 5-peso Coke at the same sari-sari store, and basically walk home through the same dark eskinita. It's an entirely different experience from reading a Grisham novel simply because of the scenery. And it's different from watching CSI, because you can't just get fingerprints or DNA samples and have things done. The government here is poor and its citizens, poorer. There is no fancy technology, not even a comprehensive database. Manila is a whole different crime scene.  And definitely, it's new in Philippine literature to have a Jesuit priest and his students defy the inefficient police system.

But it isn't new, for the rest of the world. For one, the priest reminds me of Shiro, Rin's father from Ao no Exorcist. But mostly, I am reminded of Sherlock Holmes, Metro Manila Edition. Gus is a smart man, backed up by a rich family. He is tall; Jerome is short. Jerome is a doctor. He likes to pick at the times when his supposedly mature and calm mentor starts to act like a child. The police system is inefficient, and they take pride when their own version of Lastrade, Atty. Ben Arcinas, is disproved. They work on their own, and have connections to get the information faster than the NBI.

It looks like fan-fiction of a well-educated Otaku. It sounds like elements of a pretty normal novel, if you've read enough crime, thriller and suspense fiction. And everything seems fairly plausible, however improbable.

So aside from the time that Smaller and Smaller Circles was written and published, what makes it so special that it received the highly coveted Palanca, among many other awards?

The thing is—the thing that readers don't easily see is—it is so masterfully written. It is immensely tricky to write something like this, what with the research and required knowledge and familiarity. FH Batacan is lucky to have worked for the Philippine intelligence. And it is so short, that its length itself is a carefully crafted element. Any longer and the novel would have been boring and worn out; any shorter and it would be a short story. The novel is well-condensed, and her characters know exactly what to say and when to say them. She knows when to paint the picture of the scene, and when to focus on the movement of her people. She knows when she has to write a witty dialogue, and when she has to get to the point. She knows when things should happen, where they should happen, like a god of her own universe. Batacan just knows how to make a reader keep on going.

It's difficult to make crime sound realistic, and crime-fighting priests even more so.

It's difficult to write this, and what a writer would find more clever than her characters' dialogues would be how she thought of it all up in the first place.

It's difficult to write a thriller novel set in the slums of Manila, and yet she did.

And that is exactly what she was awarded for: her writing, masterfully crafting every detail down to the very last punctuation. Even the toothache makes sense, and the French dialogues that I wish I understood, and the homemade turon and arroz caldo. All the pieces fall in place at all the perfect points.

It is the novel you'd wish you could write.

Smaller and Smaller Circles is the novel you would never wish to change.

Ten out of ten.
  • Listening to: Breaking Down - Florence + The Machine
  • Reading: The Fault in Our Stars - John Green
  • Watching: The Legend of Korra 107: The Aftermath
  • Playing: The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim
  • Eating: Leche Flan
  • Drinking: Jasmine Green Tea

AdCast - Ads from the Community

[x]

Watchers

Comments


:icon:
Add a Comment:
 
:iconmikireikai:
~Mikireikai Apr 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
P.S. i don't really believe this but better to be safe than sorry T.T

warning!
this
is
not
a
joke!
carry
on
reading!
or
you
will
die,
even
if
you
only
looked
at
the
word
warning!


ONCE
THERE
WAS
A
LITTLE
GIRL
CALLED
CLARISSA,
SHE
WAS
10
YEARS
OLD
AND
SHE
LIVED
IN
A
MENTAL
HOSPITAL,
BEACUSE
SHE
KILLED
HER
MUM
AND
DAD.








SHE
GOT
SO
BAD
SHE
STARTED
TO
KILL
ALL
THE
STAFF
IN
THE
HOSPITAL
SO
THE
GOVERMENT
DECIDED
THAT
THE
BEST
IDEA
WAS
TO
GET
RID
OF
HER
SO
THEY
SET
UP
A
SPECIAL
ROOM
TO
KILL
HER,
AS
HUMANE
AS
POSSIBLE
BUT
IT
WENT
RONG
THE
MACHINE
THEY
WERE
USEING
WENT
WRONG.








AND
SHE
WAS
SAT
THERE
IN
AGONY
FOR
HOURS
UNTILL
SHE
FINALLY
DIED.








NOW
EVERY
WEEK
ON
THE
DAY
OF
HER
DEATH
SHE
RETURNS
TO THE
PERSON
THAT
READS
THIS
LETTER,
ON
A
MONDAY
NIGHT
AT
12:00
SHE
KREEPS
INTO
YOUR
ROOM
AND
KILLS
YOU,
BUT
SLOWLY
AND
PAINFULLY
SLOWLY
CUTTING
DIFFRENT
PARTS
OF
UR
BODY
THEN
WATCHES
YOU
BLEED
TO
DEATH
IF
YOU
DONT
SEND
THIS
TO
20
PEOPLE
BY
MIDNIGHT
SHELL
BE
COMEING
TO KILL
YOU!
SEND
IT
SO
SHE
HAS
ANOTHER
LOAD
OF
PEOPLE
TO
GET
AND
FORGETS
ABOUT
YOU
DONT
BELVE ME
HEY?

EXAMPLE
1:
JENNY
DIDNT BELIVE THIS AND DELETED IT WITHOUT EVEN READING THE WHOLE THING! A FEW DAYS LATER ON THE MONDAY NIGHT SHE WAS WOKEN UP BYE LOUDE FOOTSTEPS AND HEAVY BREETHING THERE WAS CLARISSA STANDING THERE WITH A HUGE KNIFE AND WELL JENNY IS HISTORY NOW.









EXAMPLE
2:
TOM
ONLY SENT IT TO 5 PEOPLE CUZ HE THOUGHT HED BE SAFE AND IT WAS PROBLY JUST A JOKE BUT OH HOW RONG WAS HE! HE DIED THE NEXT NIGHT ON MONDAY AND ILL TELL YA NOW IT WASNT PRETTY(JUST CUZ HE SENT FIVE HE DIDNT COMPLETE THE TASK)

EXAMPLE
3:
JOEANNA
SENT IT TO 19 PEOPLE SHE THOUGHT IT WAS CLOSE ENOUGH AND WOULD DO BUT SHE WAS WRONG SHE DIED THAT NIGHT ON A MONDAY AND ONCE AGAIN IT WASNT

--
"All Good Natured Men are either Gay, Taken or Fictional"

~ That's why i stick to Anime, Cartoons and Fiction Books. :love:

Point Commissions now open :D
Reply
:iconsalemjones:
~SalemJones Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:cake: Happy Birthday! :party:

--
[link]
:heart: Visit me at GaiaOnline! :heart:
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icongioseppe:
LOL >:D HI

--
LIKE ME ---> [link]
WATCH ME --> [link]
HERE U GO -> [link]
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconjayzawn:
ARLI! I'm 12 years old say HBD >w<

--
The mango soap....

1. I looked at it, it looked like a mango.
2. I smelled it, it smelled like a mango.
3. I felt it, it felt like a mango.
4. I listened to it, it sounded like a mango.
5. I tasted it, IT DID NOT TASTE LIKE A MANGO >8C

The End. =D
Reply
(1 Reply)
Flagged as Spam
:icongmsp123:
~gmsp123 Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yo! how's life?
:icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz:
:icondummyscrollplz::iconbigtardgrinn1plz::iconbigtardgrinn2plz::iconbigtardgrinn3plz::icondummyscrollplz:
:icondummyscrollplz::iconbigtardgrinn4plz::iconbigtardgrinn5plz::iconbigtardgrinn6plz::icondummyscrollplz:
:icondummyscrollplz::iconbigtardgrinn7plz::iconbigtardgrinn8plz::iconbigtardgrinn9plz::icondummyscrollplz:
:icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz::icondummyscrollplz:

--
check out the gallery of fails!!!

__-- [link] --__

yay for other idiots besides me!
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconpeach-chelle:
~Peach-chelle Aug 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
happy birthday!!! :heart::heart::heart:!

--
tears from heaven fall
i quickly stick out my tongue
tasting acid rain
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconicecreamonster05:
Hey there!

Please tell me that you're in DLSU-Manila because I swear, I think I've seen you several times. :))

--
Whirl across the daisy patches.
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconraabgokilz:
thx for faving me, bro....
=)
I GOT BINGO
Reply
:iconshakterdoodles:
'I am a rush of spontaneity, an outburst of contagious energy, an ever-flowing fountain of thought and rich ideas. '

Must be great to Thougt Geyser.
Hmm, how do you spell geisers again?
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconshakterdoodles:
YOU'RE ONLINE!!!!!!!!
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconpeach-chelle:
~Peach-chelle Jun 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG. are my eyes deceiving me? i'm your fave photographer? is it me? :heart:

--
tears from heaven fall
i quickly stick out my tongue
tasting acid rain
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconshakterdoodles:
heys~ my phone got stolen last monday? d'you know? So you're a cheerleader now? or still a booming-noise-maker?
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconkingslygrave:
~KingslyGrave Jun 24, 2010  Student Artist
You have been hugged !

Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)

RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You -MUST- hug 6 other people, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their user page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!

Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1, On Second thought, Please give one back.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!

1-3 you're a bad friend
4-6 you're an ok friend
7-9 you're a good friend
10-& Up you're a great friend

--
Riptide x Azazel.
YESPLZ.
Reply
:iconidentitylost-noname:
PFFFFFFfffffft.

*throws a potato at you*


Hi! 8D
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconpinkachuhh:
~Pinkachuhh Jun 19, 2010  Student Interface Designer
oo minna, ako to'
ako talaga to
bat gulat na gulat ka
di ba ako nag-eexist sa mundo mo?
LOL!
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconclaudiakat:
Fellow Pinoy.:D

--
:silentkitty:

That's what fan arts are for. To let us see what our favorite characters would never do in canon.

:frail:
Reply
(1 Reply) (1 Reply)
:iconexbrainpo:
~exbrainpo Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for the fave

regards, :handshake:

--
whoever climbs the darkness, whatever lives in the deep abyss, whoever fights monsters, should see to it that in the process it does not become what it has became.
Impossible was irrelevant
Reply
:iconirbochan999:
knock knock! thanks for the fav! Yayy ^ ^

--
:heart:Mouse User^^;
:heart:Shounen-Ai that i like [link] [link]
:heart:Best Yaoi [link]
Reply
:iconshakterdoodles:
CONGRATULATIONS mmi! and great marks! :')
I've deactivated my fb account , i won't go back there for a few months.
Reply
:iconartrias:
~artrias Apr 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thx for the fav :D

--
@rtistro!™
#Vectors-Unite - Dremon Studios - Twitter

Life is nothing unless you live it, but live it with no regrets
Reply
:iconmasterppv:
Hey! :) Thank you so much for adding [link] to your Photography collection! :hug: I'm honored! :D

--
Proud founder of #UnderratedDeviants :)

Want some more exposure in the community? Try this out! [link]

PPV = my initials. My name is not intended to mean "Master of Pay-Per-View". :XD: :rofl:
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconpaperfetish:
Thank you for the favorite.
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconmvrh:
~MVRH Feb 8, 2010  Student Digital Artist
:iconmvrh::iconfaveplz:
I noticed you faved :+fav: my Daily Deviation (Life Calligraphy). Thank you for appreciate my work.

Maybe you would like another things in my gallery [link] I have a folder with lettering works[link]

thanks!

--
[link]
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icon:
Add a Comment: